viernes, 4 de marzo de 2011

2º make-up test. Edited

A brief insight into summary writing

            In her book Summary Writing, Reid (1994) provides a definition and description of the most important characteristics to be taken into consideration when writing a summary. According to the author, a summary is a concise account of the most important ideas of the text. For her, clarity, neutrality, balance, economy of details and adjectives are some of the most important features which define the genre. She also states that in order to obtain an effective summary, the understanding of the original source is of vital importance. Therefore, it is advisable to read the text repeatedly to be able to gain precise knowledge ¨ of the main ideas or actions¨ (as cited in Pintos & Crimi, 2010, p. 19).
            Other significant aspects of the genre to take into account are the length and the amount of information that will be included in the summary. Reid (1994) states that the length as well as the amount of information provided in the summary will depend on the audience. She focuses special attention on this element because depending on the reader’s knowledge on the topic being summarized, the length and amount of information to be presented will vary. Consequently, an expert audience will allow the information to be reduced while a novice one will demand further information.
            Reid (1994) classifies different types of summaries which find their existence in the target audiences and the purposes of the text. Abstracts, comparative summaries, academic/ public summaries, précis and private material summaries are some of the classes mentioned by the author ( as cited in Pintos & Crimi, 2010, p. 19). As regards the structure and organization of a summary, the genre has a fixed and abstract underlying structure realized by concrete and superficial modifications achieved by the use of language. The structure in summaries is given by introduction, body and conclusion. At a lower structural and content

level, information such as author, title, type of text and main point will be placed in some parts but not in others, for example,

Academic summaries are, according to Reid (1994), brief descriptions of academic-related topics. These summaries respect certain structural rules such as text organization. Every academic summary should have an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. Some elements that generally appear in introductions are: type of text, title of text being summarized, author of the original text, and main points of the original text; all of them neatly presented in introductory phrases. Bodies are made up of the main ideas of the original in the same order they appeared                                                                 
  ( as cited in Pintos & Crimi, 2010, p. 19)

            It is finally the conclusion of the summary that must be considered as relevant to the balance of the text as the introduction and the body. The conclusion in this genre should present the reader with a brief account of the information previously provided in the text plus a final conclusive comment. For this final part of the structure it is important to highlight the fact that no subjective opinion should be included by the writer as it is expected to be an objective account of information.



References

Pintos, V., & Crimi, Y. (2010). Unit 3: Academic writing. Retrieved December 2010, from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=7392

Reid, J. (1994). The process of paragraph writing. Englewood Cliffs, NJ: Prentice Hall Regents.

2º make-up test

            In her book Summary writing, Reid (1994) provides a definition and description of the most important characteristics to be taken into consideration when writing a summary. According to the author, a summary is a concise account of the most important ideas of the text. For her, clarity, neutrality, balance, economy of details and adjectives are some of the most important features which define the genre. She also states that in order to obtain an effective summary, the understanding of the original source is of vital importance. Therefore, it is advisable to read the text repeatedly to be able to gain precise knowledge ¨ of the main ideas or actions¨ (as cited in Pintos & Crimi, 2010, p. 19). Other significant aspects of the genre to take into account are the length and the amount of information that will be included in the summary. Reid (1994) states that the length as well as the amount of information provided in the summary will depend on the audience. She focuses special attention on this element,[YAC2]  because according to [YAC3] the reader’s knowledge on the topic being summarized, the length and amount of information to be presented will vary. Consequently, an expert audience will allow the information to be reduced while a novice one will demand further information[YAC4] .
            Reid[YAC5]  classifies different types of summaries which find their existence in the target audiences and the purposes of the text. Abstracts, comparative summaries, academic/ public summaries, précis and private material summaries are some of the classes mentioned by the author (Reid, 1994; Swales & Feak, 1994. As [YAC6] cited in Pintos & Crimi, 2010, p. 19). As regards the structure and organization of a summary, the genre has a fixed and abstract underlying structure realized by concrete and superficial modifications achieved by the use of language. The structure in summaries is given by introduction, body and conclusion. At a lower structural and content level, information such as author, title, type of text and main point will be placed in some parts but not in others, for example,

Academic summaries are, according to Reid (1994), brief descriptions of academic-related topics. These summaries respect certain structural rules such as text organization. Every academic summary should have an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. Some elements that generally appear in introductions are: type of text, title of text being summarized, author of the original text, and main points of the original text; all of them neatly presented in introductory phrases. Bodies are made up of the main ideas of the original in the same order they appeared.
                                                                               ( as cited in Pintos & Crimi, 2010, p. 19[YAC7] )

It is finally the conclusion of the summary that must be taken into account. For this final part of the structure it is important to highlight the fact that no objective opinion should be included by the writer as it is expected to be an objective account of information[YAC8] .










References

Pintos, V. , & Crimi, Y. (2010). Unit 3: Academic writing. Retrieved December 2010, from http://caece.campusuniversidad.com.ar/mod/resource/view.php?id=7392

Reid, J. (1994). The process of paragraph writing. Englewood Cliffs, NJ: Prentice Hall Regents.

Paper Editing
Name and Surname:

Topic:

Draft #                               Date:
Title:
Dimension
Criteria
Points
LAYOUT
1
2
3
4
(5 to 20)


Format
No headers, no page numbers, no clear margins. Spacing problems. Inappropriate font.
No Header included. Page numbers absence. Spacing problems.
Header and page numbers included. Spacing problems. Inappropriate font. 
Clear paper’s presentation. There are page numbers. Respected margins. Correct spacing and type & size of font. 1.5 or double interlining.
3

Header

Not included.
Included. Too much information.
Included. Not well balanced.
Included. Precise info is given. Well balanced.
4

Main
Title

Not included.
Included. Not suitable. Underlined, highlighted or italicized. 
Included. Appealing. Underlined, highlighted or italicized.

Included. Appealing. Centered.
1


References

Not mentioned.
Plagiarism.
Mentioned vaguely. Not on a new sheet of paper.
Not clear use of references or erroneous sources acknowledgement
Not clear use of references or erroneous sources acknowledgement.
Sources cited clearly in a reference list at the end of the paper. APA style. 

3


In-text citations

Not included.
Plagiarism. 

Little use of in-text citations. Incorrect use of required style.  

Included. Not well balanced. Repeated pattern. (e.g. too many quotes, only paraphrasing, etc).

Included. Well balanced. Different techniques applied. It is read smoothly. APA.
2
CONTENT
1
2
3
4
(10 to 40)


Data analysis
& editing
Not clear analysis. Relationships & comparisons cannot be followed. Editing not achieved.
Brief. Not substantial. Some connections can be followed. Some minor editing achieved. Lots of aspects to work on.
Clear. Good analysis. No evidence presented. Some corrections. Some things need to be polished. Inversion. Hedging.
Conditionals.
Very good. Clear analysis & editing. Comparisons can be established. Clear corrections.  Evidence is provided. Inversion. Hedging & conditionals.
3


Terminology/ Word choice
Difficult to follow. Not understandable. Imprecise language.
No acronyms clarification.
Inappropriate terminology.
Little clarification.
Some terms are not academic.
Legible terminology.
Clarification.
More academic style. Effective.
Legible terminology. New terms clarification. Effective vocabulary. Good use of connectors. Academic style.
3

Spelling
Full of errors. Unreadable.
Many errors. Some parts unreadable.
Few errors. Readable.
All words are spelled correctly.
4
Sentence variety
Many sentence fragments. Same pattern and length.
Some sentence fragments. Same pattern & length.
Most sentences are complete and varied in pattern & length.
Complete sentences in a variety of patterns and lengths.  
3
Organization




Vague ideas. Long & confusing intro. Unrelated development. Blurred conclusion.

Some ideas connected to each other. Purpose established. No transitions.
Main point presented. Two of the three parts are not clear or too long.

Connected ideas.  Clear purpose. Marked transitions. One of the three parts is not clear or too long.

Connected ideas: supporting the main topic. Clear and concise introduction. Clear development: good clarification of major points.
Clear conclusion.

3
Punctuation

Frequent and major errors that obscure meaning.

Some frequent or major errors: Readers’ confusion.

A few errors.

No punctuation errors.

2
Paragraph content & paragraph length

Not balanced: too long & too short paragraphs are presented.


Some paragraphs relate to the topic. Not balanced: too long or too short paragraphs are presented.

Most paragraphs are related to the topic. Well balanced.

Paragraph length has been respected & achieved.
Smooth.
Clear and precise.

2
Grammar

Grammar choices are confusing. Mixture of tenses.

Some grammar mistakes. Grammar choices sometimes confuse the readers. 

Appropriate grammar choice. No meaning interference. 

Completely appropriate grammar choice: Help readers understand meaning.

3
Details

No or little details (such as explanations, examples, etc) to support & explain the topic.

Some accurate details. Do not always support topic.

Accurate info that supports the topic.

Accurate and relevant info that fully support the topic.

3
Tone & audience

Unclear & inappropriate tone. Audience not considered.

Inconsistent tone. Incomplete idea of audience.

Appropriate tone. Audience is considered. 

Appropriate & consistent tone. Audience correctly identified.
3




Total

43/60


Comments:
Good job. Your mark is 4 (four)

 [YAC1]Title?
 [YAC2]Punctuation.
 [YAC3]Repeated.
 [YAC4]This is a too long paragraph.
 [YAC5]Sth is missing
 [YAC6]Punctuation and capitalization.
 [YAC7]Why does it have another type of font? Check format for block quotes.
 [YAC8]This paragraph is too short compared to the erst of the paper.